[verse 1]
Love is a vampire
Draining your soul
Love is a disease
Eating away what you know(Of yourself)
Love is an enemy
The kind with a smile
Love is an apple tree
Thats been decaying for a while
Love is the ocean
Everyone drowns
Love is the hand
That pulls you to the ground(Just for now)
Love is a backdoor
Run if you can
But it's always in your way
No matter where you stand
[pre-chorus]
So love me tonight
[chorus]
I want to love you to death
Too late, too late
Cause you're already dead
Already dead to me
I want to lay you to rest
Lay with you, lay with you
Lie awake all through this test
This test of you and me
[verse 2]
Love is a hammer
Pounding my skull
If only the
Reverse side wasn't dull(Stab me you may)
Love is a spiked chair
And you've gone insane
the needles don't sink in
You're just so used to the pain
Love isn't coming
It's already gone
The reason why I won't
Make it before dawn(Drifting away)
LOVE ISN'T COMING
AND YOU SHOULD'VE KNOWN
I'M ONLY PRETENDING
THAT I'M STILL INTO THIS SHOW!
[pre-chorus]
But please....Love me tonight
[chorus]
I want to love you to death
Too late, too late
Cause you're already dead
Already dead to me
I want to lay you to rest
Lay with you, lay with you
Lie awake all through this test
This test of you and me
[close]
Love is a vampire
Has this been told
Blood fiends, they come and go
As you're slowly getting old...
Author notes
I..LOVE THIS!
It's kinda metaphorical. It's about staying in a relationship that went completely downhill, but just enduring the pain of it all.
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Comments
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You very rythmatic; so keep up on the writing. Its a gift and you have it in the palm of your hands
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Night Terrors -
damn good!!!
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I love it too, I know exactly what you meant when you wrote this - I've been there and done it and it's absolutely awful to go through. Excellent writing.
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sweet bean hun!
is this one of my chemical romance songs hun? i cant remember...=^_^= im such an air head! lol. well either way i still like it! -
Aww, It's so cute!
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I like these lyrics and the underlying meaning. It's very good. Well written.
Thank you very much for your entry
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this is really good, one of the best lyrics i have read tonight! I truly agree with this piece. your are an amazing writer!!
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