I part your hidden curtain
make my way through the fold
to envelop myself in the warmth therin
To nestle there is my fondest desire
to swim in the puddle
to lap it up gently
to drink it up thirstily
to eat
and be satified
your cup runneth over
onto my chin
in my mouth
curly little hairs in my teeth
goddess floss
dripping onto my chest
down my stomach
will you rub it in?
the salve that stills my soul
moan
whisper
whimper
wet
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Welcome to AllPoetry!!!
I do not read too much erotica, but this was tastefully written, not vulgar or trashy like some may come across...Nicely written!
Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you enjoy yourself on this site!
Blessed Be,
Jeremy
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Welcome to AllPoetry
Vivid with a touch of romance. I think that softeness around the edges in a write in this genre makes it more effective. A person can relate to the emotion beyond the bare mechanics. It is more like reading a romance novel that watching through a crack in the wall so to speak
Keep writing and again, welcome to AP
Violet
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