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Everlasting



Pulsation
streaming as though
an occurence of explosion
~ near ~
Anticipation
startles my waking hours
questioning your appearance
~ soon ~
Frustration
infiltrates my strenght
weaking my waiting
~ sadly ~
Deliverance
of life, love and nearness
succombs to your presence
~ everlasting ~

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  • Sweet-Sins
    November 1
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    awww this is good
    good luck
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