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One x-ray

Together we sat
Together in peace
Maybe one day
My heart will get an x-Ray
My heart is broken
You have stolen
Why leave it in pieces
When you can cover the creases
Done leave me alone
Be with me forever
For forever is
One x-Ray 

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  • Massacringchainsaw
    November 2

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    NICE

    very straight forward and blunt i think that you should go more into depth on it i understand the way that you put it out but others may not


  • Kazunan
    November 2
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    Simple and nice. Keep writing, I'd like to see more of your work.