You whisper in my ear
and tell me the best secrets
Your smiles saves my day
and conquers all my fear
Your kisses so sweet
like chocolate melting in my mouth
i can't help but smile
when our lips meet
You hold me tight
in your little arms
and tell me you love me
and everything will be alright
I would give you everything
to just make smile
or save you
I would do anything
I never thought I would say this
Just to hear your heart beat
I would give my own
at look down at you and smile
A contest entry
- I Would Give It All For You by Morrigan Trinity.
550 points, ended November 16, 13 entries
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I really liked "Your kisses so sweet like chocolate melting in my mouth." What great imagry. Thanks so much for entering and I wish you the best of luck.
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Love for our children just grows stronger
I wish I could go back to hug them longer.
Well said, Well done,
Cheryl
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A Sweet poem about a sweet subject lol Id like to see the poem in say thirteen to fifteen years
well done
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Love is sweet anyway you tell it. It, it has no calories, and its rewards burn off extra pounds. Imagine a sweet kiss savored as you did that tiny piece of chocalate bar? Your tonue searches the recesses of you mouth in hunt for thr tantalizing teasing taste. Yummm kisses and I don't mean chocolate ones. Goodluck in your contest. Rose
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I thought this was a cute and sweet piece. I found some spelling errors, so you may want to proof read this. Love is an amazing feeling. Nice expression.
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that is very sweet. innocent too.
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