I inhaled the strawberry-rose scent,
inflaming attraction between us.
But as our anniversary gift,
I gave you back the markers
before their vibrant colors died
and before their fragrances vanished.
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30 words
PROMPT: too much of anything can make you sick
option 4. anniversaries.
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Wow. Such a great metaphor. I love this.
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this was such a great piece that i feel did a great job showing symbolism
i really enjoyed it
thanks for entering. -
the title reminded of the option of being six so it was a surprise when i read it. it was a great poem and clearly made the point. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck.
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i love scented markers.
and stickers.
whiteout is not scented, but i enjoy a good sniff of it anyway.
D:
great piece!
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awww but giving them back before the colors died is sad
great job on the prompt 
best of luck in the contest
Sean
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