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Haiku #8

lightening
hops from cloud to cloud -
a soft pillow

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assignment for the haiku-class by myron/azure85

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  • Mango Memories
    November 26
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    this is wonderful!


  • Sonya-Erasmus silver member
    November 18
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    It's so cold today, I want to hop hop hop onto my soft pillow
    Beautiful Haiku Erwin.
    Love
    Sonya


  • Phoenix Rising
    November 16
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    sleeps on the pillow zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
    i love you bro
    this is cool
    i want to hop from cloud to cloud


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 5
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    Wow interesting haiku
    love the thoughts of the soft pillow
    Keep on penning these great creations hun
    Julie