Her Iloveyous travelled through gravity to Mars; physics claims that sound travels four times faster through water than air;
but yesterday he was ten thousand miles under great impenetrable seas.
Author notes
her two revelations:
i love you
and
sound waves can't travel back in time.
30 words
prompt: revelation.
In a list
A contest entry
- diction; quickie. by HereComesTheSun.
525 points, ended November 2, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Quickie. by Mango Memories.
400 points, ended November 3, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Looking For Favourites - Impress Me! by LavendeRFlameS.
2300 points, ended November 24, 92 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you dislike, so I can edit.
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
Very true. Very beautiful. Very amazing. Loved it, and congratulations in the contest.
-
nicly done!
-
Congrats on the gold.
I don't like the Iloveyou as one word
but I can see how it has an importance.
Pen on.xx
-
very nice. congratulations.
-
wowza
all i can say
wowza
thanks for entering -
how true your words are... great take on the prompt
best of luck in the contest
Sean
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
