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Sap my terror, addict.
I; all encompassing captivate,
Complex charmed disarming allurement.
      Designed in mind to twirl your head.

Fiercely thirsting adept.
Veins, humming hymns; bled verbose template.
Essence gathered; soul swamping procurement.
      Sublime with time, you'll curl up fed.

Used

Lovelorn odalisque's deft;
Refusal all help's alleviate.
Non-desirous cleansing; auto augment.
        Confined chime; amoungst grimed undead.

Us

Mirthless, murderous debt;
Hatred's chiseled longing incubate.
Angst's aphrodisiac disfigurement;
      Misalligned phantoms pine; ill-bred.

U...

No saviour; dissident;
Yet I sought your ameliorate.
Fist clenching horror's trucculent comment;
      Melted spine, spent brain' unwind, fled.


                  I would save you if I could,
                          Orphan Spirit; understood?
                                Hid within addictions' hood.     

























Author notes

prompt:

Quote: "I wish I could find those right words to stop your aching pain. I'd say anything to make you stop hurting. To you, the addict, my words would be cocaine." Steph Koehnen


rhyme scheme:

first lines = 6 syllables
seconds = 9
thirds = 10
flourth = 8

five sets so numbered

last three lines contain 7 syllables each

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