It is divine,
for a thought reached
out and reveled
in her sphere;
pure admiration
landed wholly.
She pours words:
nectar pouring slowly from a gem
bejewelled and crowned;
a universe transfixed
in releasing her glory.
I could only hope
to be some type of
little star in
her galaxy;
the prompt released
upon these eyes
and joyfully proceeded
to her plateau,
of creation.
A contest entry
- Favourites ONLY by Laura Lamarca.
1300 points, ended November 20, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is beautiful!! Flows wonderfully along.
Best wishes,
K
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thank you...it was fun writing this!
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A very beautiful tribute hon...
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Very nicely done a wonderful write for Laura and in a style that she truly appreciates. I think you will do well with this write, best of luck... Scott
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I truly admire her. Thank you for the lovely comment.
:-)
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outstanding
and does the prompt req. justice..very good stuff my friend!
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You have confused a bit with this one..I have read it many times,,..I will not give up, though,,..Give me time..By the way, I meant to tell you..You are beautiful..truly
John
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I'm blushing...thank you for the compliment. The poem is directed towards the poet who invited me to partake in this contest. She's quite brilliant, so I felt honored that i was invited.
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this is fluid, both in thought and execution; the subtle alliterations and assonance work well, especially upon the eyes whilst reading. i enjoyed this.
thank you for entering.
laura.
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thank you. :-)
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