I have been since noon.
The groom is on the loose.
Friends say forget him
I'm waiting, he is still not here.
I just want to cook his goose.
A contest entry
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475 points, ended November 9, 7 entries
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Comments
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the rhyme to me was a bit cheesy but gave the story a light hearted feel i didnt expect from the picture.
thanks for entering -
Mac your poem is so true. When I was a child a neighbor of ours was stood up at the Altar. She was a lovely young lady.
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LOL And "cook his goose" you surely should. I cannot imagine such a smack in the face for a lovely bride to be. I mean especially in an era where we have cell phones and all. LOL I had to chuckle although I would never want to be her. Great job! The best to you in the contest.
Always ♥
Renee
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