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Apologies Spill Like Rainbow Colored Cancer

Old wounds

Have become new friends


























--

I tried
[Promise?]

And it was all for nothing
















I tore my heart out
    In an attempt

To reconstruct


In the end,

I was left
With an empty shell



















Who I am
Died somewhere

Along this twisted road




And I cant even find the body










































I fought for my life

I tried
[Promise?]


But now,
I've got nothing left






And I cant do this

Anymore

Author notes

You wont understand this

If you dont know me







So dont even try.
--

"They lied when they said
That this would be easy."

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  • ... Aidy you worry me.
    fuck you worry me and i kinda don't think i totally understand because i still don't know what's happened. happening. take your pick.


    it doesn't matter what i write here, you already know everything that i could possibly say.

    [i.e the cliche i'm here if you need me.]



    be strong, dear.


    in realation to this [said, poem thing] i liked it. i missed your writing.


    p.s. good shit.


    • SongOfSilence
      November 3

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      Im sorry -.-
      It's better if you dont know. At least, not now.

      I know ^^'

      ... Believe me, I'm trying -.-'

      Glad you did ^^
      This was kind of a fail. Just some lines thrown together.

      p.s No. NOT.

      • As you keep saying... for the last however many months.

        I'd still like to know though.





        It doesn't show it [in said poem]
        :]

        p.s. yes. yes it is.




  • n.e.o.n gold member
    November 1

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    I do not know you, but I enjoyed this very much. I can relate to the feelings, not in the same sense perhaps. This made a fantastic piece. I liked the layout. I know what it feels like to have nothing and be in despair. Well done.


  • tidoubleguher
    October 31
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    I think I get it

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