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- Nowhere- ( Silver )

Missing image

 

I long to see tomorrow

painted sun-shot under shades

where today I am left

a little undecided

in which direction I take.

 

Inside was my out

cocooned within these broken wings

could I take the brittle

untie knotting

break free...

 

Steer amongst the age of grey

chase lavender field that guide me

soaring high

ever floating

 

you dream...

 

my reality.

 

 

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No 2 Nowhere..

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  • laura0757 gold member
    November 13

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    first of all I would like to personally thank you for your most gracious comments, coming from a writer such as your self I will take this as big compliment, and when I came to this poem, I thought there is something special about it...I read it twice...the line lavender fields....I have written on lavender fields...and the scent they would bring in...when I write sometimes about my late sister, who's death is still a shock to me, even after four years coming up soon,,weird thing is i never remember her anniversary of her death, a big blur....but as sad as it was wathchhing her die and struggle for nine years of hell...in its purest shittiest form...I envision her in a field of lavender fields...........and this vision bring me comfort when words are all we have left.............I thank you for sharing this beautiful write....Laura ps. congratulations on your silver...........well done i can read why..........


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 10

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    I love this poem

    For me it brought a young girl through life and dancing within her dreams and as she twirls about and catches her reflection sh e has hair of grey now but with all the wonder of memories laced with love she smiles and whispers Im ok


  • MysticalRayne
    November 4
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    Congrats on your win - this piece is beautiful


  • perfectsunset gold member
    November 4

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    Oh the sensations of this piece
    soothed my distraught mind,
    and gave me insight into
    something meaningful,
    deep in metaphor and
    inspiration.

    I adore this piece
    and congrats on the silver!

    xxx


  • daviscth silver member
    November 4

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    Congratulations on the well earned silver trophy sis. The imagery in these lines just blow me away. Such a perfect write for the picture.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 4

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    Ooooh...Just love this...No wonder it got the silver...The butterfly imagery set this one select as a special write
    "Inside was my out
    cocooned within these broken wings"...One of your best! sis


  • penman gold member
    November 1
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    Excellent

    What a wonderful write. so perfect for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest

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