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Incide the Confines of a Circle

 

Inside space within a circle, watching it slowly spin

                                    no hate exist in my heart, no one I believe a friend

 

Floating within the circle, routine is natures cry

                          moving from same to same, often the soul wonders why

 

The circle spins into oblivion, useless need for lock or key

                   darkness of death exist beyond, when usefulness sets me free

 

Inside the confines of the circle, the blood and genes conflict in kin

 through the years my unique legacy, will disappear into the circle that spins

 

 

Author notes

What I want is to poetically tell me how you feel right now.

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  • PerfectImperfection
    November 20

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    A thoughtful piece of depth is spiral of emotion's chain - that which binds us. Well spoken, and nicely penned. Thank you for your entry!


  • glenn shannon silver member
    November 2
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    gee Mary this spun me but its rather brilliant clever mind sweet soul bless you glen


  • arafura gold member
    October 31
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    Wonderful! Great take on the prompt, poet!

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