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Just stretch;

I stretched out on tip toes and it was like I could touch the sky. It was like my finger tips could rip right through the artificial clouds. And everything was fine till the clouds were slit right through the middle with your rusty thunder. And I was drenched skin deep.

You see, I don’t understand why I let you get this deep under my skin. I don’t understand why I let this go so far. To me it seems that tears were your favorite drug, and you didn’t care who the suppler was. You just wanted what you craved for.

I think you dug your nails into me, so deep that it was near impossible to pull you out. I think we were both in so deep, deeper than either of us could manage, so we fought to get to the surface.

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Not the best but I like the meaning of it(:

Sarahiscoolio loves me. Can't you tell? LOL.

Jocelyn.

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  • Sarahiscoolio
    October 31
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    this is sum pretty gay emo shit. i cant believe i wasted time commenting. faggotish write.


    • Jocelyn.Jaded
      October 31
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      I disagree (; it's not "gay emo" anything. I can't believe you wasted your time commenting about how you wasted your time. Haha.

      • Sarahiscoolio
        October 31
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        um yea it is. u idiot! oh adn nice default picture NOT. ur fuking ugly.

        • Jocelyn.Jaded
          October 31
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          LOLOL

          Naw, it's not . And I couldn't care less about that because it has nothing to do with my write, which was the main reason you commented. Me being "fuking ugly" has nothing to do with this write. (:

          • Sarahiscoolio
            October 31
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            WOW. Ur fukin stoopid! u ugly whore. god hates u.

            • Jocelyn.Jaded
              October 31
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              LMAO ! Oh yes, I'm STOOPID (:! Oh && I don't think ugly and whore should be in the same sentence. Ugly meaning not a lot of guys would probably like me. Whore meaning I have sex a lot. They don't really go together(;. Oh and I don't care, I don't believe in god. But since you said "god hates u" I assume you believe in him? How do you think he'd like you saying he hates one of his children (; Hmmm?

              • Sarahiscoolio
                October 31
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                wtf. ur so fukin dumb. i do believe in him got a problem? adn eww u worship the deivl.


                • Jocelyn.Jaded
                  October 31
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                  No I don't have a problem with that. And actually, no I don't. I don't believe in the devil either(:

                  • Sarahiscoolio
                    October 31
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                    WOW. u idoit. ur ugly ADN ur writing suxxs. wha r u gonna do with ur life? B a stripper? fukk u.

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