I became conscious, aware of my place
Of my place in eternity
By going beyond the bounds of time and space
While still limited by physcial reality
When as a child one summer day
I paused in a moment from childish play
To lie on my back and just be still
The sun was warm and I could feel
Its lemony kisses on my bare feet
Bathing my tiny body with heat
As it had done others from milliennia ago
And bathing in its radiant flow
I felt one with eternity
A part of its light
I was, I am, I will be
Timeless, eternal, reality
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Profound. Beautiful!
"While still limited by physcial reality"
Dear Poet,
Lovely rendering of the child's connection to the ALL. Strong. Vocal. Powerfully
expressed.
Brava! I can see and feel the Spirit in Her/your little face.
Blessed Be Your Heart!
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Thank you so much for the comment! You can see and feel the spirit in her my little face. This uplifted me and made me feel like my life had meaning again
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KNOW THAT YOUR LIFE HAS MEANING REGARDLESS OF WHAT ANY ONE OR ANY THING SAYS OR DOES NOT SAY! YOU ARE HERE AND THAT IS YOUR PURPOSE TO HEAL AND DO WHAT IT IS YOU ARE DOING. KNOW THIS AND BE GLAD.
LOVE AND LIGHT
STAY
FOR EVER
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Awesome...a child awesomely feels her place in God's plan.. and that presence that makes you aware of God...Wonderful piece!
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Judy Eyes
To evolve or even be blessed with such instincts at a tender age. Just amazing indeed. Sumerian tales of creation...Only for those with deep spiritual understandings. Excellent write.

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Must of been an unforgetable accurance, it does happen to children as they are connected to the Cosmos, till they loose their innocence by Knowing
Well done

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