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My Moment of Time Standing Still

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I became conscious, aware of my place
Of my place in eternity
By going beyond the bounds of time and space
While still limited by physcial reality
When as a child one summer day
I paused in a moment from childish play
To lie on my back and just be still
The sun was warm and I could feel
Its lemony kisses on my bare feet
Bathing my tiny body with heat
As it had done others from milliennia ago
And bathing in its radiant flow
I felt one with eternity
A part of its light
I was, I am, I will be
Timeless, eternal, reality

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  • Luce
    December 9, 2009
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    Beautiful baby


  • rite gold member
    December 5, 2009

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    You communicate with other places and times while warm sun rays caress your skin. Stepping across the limits seen as impenetrable and unchanging. You mock the laws of physics by being who you were intended to be, against all odds. It is always an unspeakable pleasure to see precious souls defy induced limitations and understand the reality beyond this harsh illusion. To write like this, to be you. Thank you dear one. Take care.


  • liquidmindforever
    November 9, 2009
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    Profound. Beautiful!

    "While still limited by physcial reality"

    Dear Poet,

    Lovely rendering of the child's connection to the ALL. Strong. Vocal. Powerfully
    expressed.

    Brava! I can see and feel the Spirit in Her/your little face.

    Blessed Be Your Heart!

    stay
    for ever
    liquid


    • Jalalbad gold member
      November 18, 2009
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      Thank you so much for the comment! You can see and feel the spirit in her my little face. This uplifted me and made me feel like my life had meaning again


      • liquidmindforever
        November 18, 2009

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        KNOW THAT YOUR LIFE HAS MEANING REGARDLESS OF WHAT ANY ONE OR ANY THING SAYS OR DOES NOT SAY! YOU ARE HERE AND THAT IS YOUR PURPOSE TO HEAL AND DO WHAT IT IS YOU ARE DOING. KNOW THIS AND BE GLAD.
        LOVE AND LIGHT
        STAY
        FOR EVER
        LIQUID


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 4, 2009

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    Awesome...a child awesomely feels her place in God's plan.. and that presence that makes you aware of God...Wonderful piece!.

  • Bob Fox
    November 1, 2009

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    Judy Eyes

    To evolve or even be blessed with such instincts at a tender age. Just amazing indeed. Sumerian tales of creation...Only for those with deep spiritual understandings. Excellent write.


  • Luce
    October 31, 2009

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    Must of been an unforgetable accurance, it does happen to children as they are connected to the Cosmos, till they loose their innocence by Knowing
    Well done

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