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because the thought of you simply isn't enough;

I can't wait to see you again,
returned home safe and sound;
a beautiful, stronger relationship
will unarguably be found.

I can't wait to be by your side,
for our smiles to be in sync;
I look forward to staring into eyes
that share the same dreams.

I can't wait for you to hug me,
for our shoulders to touch;
because your arms around my body
embrace my heart so much.




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prompt:
I can't wait to see you again

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  • HereComesTheSun
    November 1

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    such powerfull emotion
    you did a great job expressing that

    ps. the prompt reminds me of hannah montana.


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    October 31
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    awwwwwwww


  • Sweet-Sins
    October 31
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    this is really good. welldone
    x


  • Stickboy gold member
    October 31

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    awww what a sweet poem filled with wonderful thoughts , best of luck in contest
    Sean