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Kindly reminder-October 31st.

 

 

Her mum taught
her patiently the art
of soul cake baking.

It was tradition
It was custom
It was (murder)

For women long ago
It was a desperate
“ under-taking"

 

Never –spoken-aloud;

a nod and sigh
humble tearful eyes.

When petticoats
hid bruises
black as darkest night.

When a womans
cry –howled- unto
the midnight skies.

There she be;
bruised, baking
ancestral remedy.

Tearfully stirring

laudanum, lye, and arsenic

folded gently into rum frosting.

 

Peacefully slumbers

(froths) a wicked man
unto eternal sleep. Amen.

An eye for an eye
justice or revenge
A woeful  hallelujah

 

Each year, October 31st was
Widows Redemption Day-
Requiring;
A perfectly baked soul cake.

Blended, tended, carefully
by  hand;
Rich butter, whole vanilla bean
And farm fresh eggs; whipped

with buttermilk, yeast and flour
delicately laced with summers
raspberry n’ cream topping.

 

Left upon her porch-for-
the wretched and poor
to devour, feast and pray.

Behold the beggars heart

which gratefully -repaid-

pleading-unto-the heavens;

 

Bless this home bountifully

Protect this home mightily

Forgive the living and their dead.

 

On October 31st;
each silent widow slept
soundly-and- morbidly- blessed.

It was tradition
It was custom,
It was (murder)

Kindly reminder;
Don’t forget to bake
Your….very best….


…..soul cake……..
October Thirty-first.
(Live not in sorrow, agony, or regret)


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Author notes

a dark October 31st FREEWRITE:

tidbit of Actual history;
from the United Kingdom
where soul cakes are made and placed upon their front porches,
for the poor to eat and intercede on behalf of the family
with their pure and impoverished hearts.

(Is there not a finer blessing, than a wonderful night of restful sleep!)
(hope you enjoyed)
fun to write!
wicked irish troll in me loves to find the gruesome dark in our living histories!
oh..and don't
forget bake at 350 degree's -no longer than 40 minutes.

Violence is un-acceptable
unless
it is properly approved
and funded
by the government.
(now that is a sad dark truth)

pic; google images.com




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  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    November 2

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    Wow this had a dark tone to it. Well done very well done indeed. You have written a good piece like I said it has very dark tone to it. Didn't think you could or would do dark Thank you for sharing.

  • wow, i don't knoww whta to say about this other then that, great job on this, keep it flowing


  • CountryCousin
    October 31

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    Oh my.

    It is strange that today I attended the funeral of a lady in our church. She was frail and often did without. I will remember both the first part of this and the last. This is one to remember and the first case scenario it seems justified.


  • Stickboy gold member
    October 31

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    I'm getting my ingrediants together as I'm reading this... do I have a cake to bake loved this , always love your work. best of luck in the contest
    Sean