Dreadful ghostly whispers,
Skeletons at night -
All the monsters screaming,
Surely give a fright.
Owl wings are flapping,
Goosebumps up your spine.
Little children napping,
Full moon at your sight.
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poem of my daughter
Is it spooky?
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awww, little flutters than in many lives, they are non existent, I'd say put uP with the little noises that are non spooked than those one's silent enough to posing ommisons. lovely read.
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is it spooky? lol, i love it, it conjures up lots of imagery and i could imagine reading it on Halloween or even a sleep over and spooking the kids with it ass the words are spoke in a scary story way, its great
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If this was read in a circle, flashlight thing, my ten year old grand would say it was too scary, my five year old would complain it was not scary enough. Spooky, like fear, is very subjective. It is durned cute though.
Peace
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That was definitely cute, I could see it read with a circle of friends, lights turned off save that of the flashlight pointed upwards at the author's face... A good mood-setter.
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That's pretty darn good. Perfect for Halloween.
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I really like this
It's short and cute/spooky
The first stanza is my fav.
Thank you for sharing!
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this reminded me of halliween when i was younger. thank you for bringing back the memmories.
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