All my dreams of happiness
shattered without a care.
All those sweet nothings
you whispered into my ear
I now realize were just that.
Fell hard into your
you sapphire blue eyes.
Breathed only once
your heavenly scent
before all your neglect.
Rumors did travel
around the school.
I ignored them
I thought I could trust you
and I've never been more wrong.
Told me to shut up
when I begged you not to go.
How ironic that was
when you were the one
who should've been on your knees.
Sunset now
the bane of the day.
Sunset now
the lover of the night
pursuing relentlessly.
I thought you were
everything I wanted.
You only take and never give:
you've given me grief
and stole my will to live.
I realize now
that my only regret
is that I'll never get
to love again.
All because of your sweet nothings
that's all they will ever be to me.
Author notes
The words I used were (in order of use): without, realize, eyes, only, neglect, shut up, sunset.
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All my dreams of happiness
shattered without a care.
All those sweet nothings
you whispered into my ear
I now realize were just that.
i really liked it great poem,
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Thanks so much!
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Sunset now
the bane of the day.
Sunset now
the lover of the night
pursuing relentlessly.
this is an awesome poem you've penned here, i'd read more of your poems, but you two have too many.
anyways good luck in the contest hun.
matt
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Heehee. Thanks, and if you think I have a lot of poems, look at my friend, Tinselpool. It's insane, but also insanely funny.
Thanks.
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Ahh... sweet little Tinsel. My lil sis. Yeah, she drives me insane herself, and it's not just her poems. Nice wolf pic you got there hun, reminds me of my other sis Wulf Eyez de Wintre. Hey didn't Tinsel say that you were her sis? I guess I can be your older bro too.
matt
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She drives me insane because she constantly belittles herself!
I like wolfies, they're so awesome. 
Yay! I have a new older bro now ... my only older brother.
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don't we all hate sweet nothings?
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Yes, we do.
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finalist
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Thank you so much for sharing this peom. I love the final 6 lines
I realize now
that my only regret
is that I'll never get
to love again.
All because of your sweet nothing
that's all they will ever be to me
these resolution are so sad.
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Thank you!
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Dang I love this.
Sad, Intense.................... pure awesomeness.
I thought you were
everything I wanted.
You only take and never give:
you've given me grief
and stole my will to live.
I like this. I can relate to it at the moment (which is what I wanted)
Good.
Good Luck
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed.
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Excellent write here
You have a deep perseption of life written in this piece . And the very young should reallize the young are stll just learning the things at scholl and about love . So never give yourself to another while still in school for they arent looking for something permanennt oh they will tell you they are but say no and see how long they last .Save your heart and protect your wings while young .For it isnt just the boys fault it is yours for concenting .Great write her
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Thank you, it was inspired by many different songs.
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forgoooooooot the clappy!
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this was beautiful mandeeeeeeeeeee
i loved it. my fav:
Told me to shut up
when I begged you not to go.
How ironic that was
when you were the one
who should've been on your knees.
that is so you!
good luck!
claire
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Thx.
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no prob
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here's your word bank. use at least 5 words.
heartbreak
backfire
realize
shut up
refuse
neglect
only
eyes
sunset
sobbing
home
without
good luck!
claire -
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Luv ya.
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i know
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Grr.
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you know it
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