Took a pen to the back of my hand
Thinking about another mess I didn't plan
Guess you didn't know we'd break up
Hope you don't think that we'll make up
I wrote "I heart ?" wishing that you would see
That you and I could never be
Had I only known
You'd make me cry all alone
Maybe you sat at home
While I waited by the phone
There's no such thing as you and me
I know eventually
One day you'll wake up
Realize we haven't made up
Then you'll really smell the break up
And see the "I heart ?" on the back of my hand
Or maybe then I'll even have another man
Author notes
Prompt:
Song name: I Heart Question Mark
Artist: Taylor Swift
A contest entry
- Rounds Quickie #1 by Tinselpool.
460 points, ended November 5, 9 entries
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My first impression what thinking of a dude that I THOUGHT that me and him could never be.
I liked this poem. I just hope that the writing on you hand wasn't a tattoo because that must be something you'll truly regret unless you find a man with the same name or same nickname. douces...daprincess93 -
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lol Don't worry. I only wrote this poem based off the song so there were no tattooes involved. I'm glad you liked the poem. Thanks for reading. XD
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it is really good
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Auto rhyme does help. XD And song and picture prompts seem to work best for me.
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this was a really beautiful poem! especially liked this part:
There's no such thing as you and me
I know eventually
One day you'll wake up
Realize we haven't made up
Then you'll really smell the break up
good luck!
claire
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