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Are You There?

Are you there God?
Do you hear me?
I see you in my dreams,
I feel you with me.

You give me courage,
you give me strength,
to try to live by your word each and everyday.

I know I sin, I know I do wrong.
But you give me the energy to go on.
It's evening and im praying to you..
Because I know your there God.
I know you hear me,
Thank you for never letting go.
Amen.

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  • Fridazechild56
    November 2
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    Good job, Becca. I really like the way you expressed yourself in this. Keep up the good work!


  • hershey101
    November 1

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    I like it I like it how you feel about god and knowing that he is there with you all the time even if you make mistakes you still keep going strong Great poem.. God Bless


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 31

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    Admittance is half the battle. Like how you spoke this. We know that we are not perfect. And it sounds like you know He is listening to keep you on the right path. Nice.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions, feel fre to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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  • Sweet-Sins
    October 31

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    awww this is good
    again tho, the background makes the poem hard to read
    lovely entry tho
    x