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Sometimes

Sometimes sorry isn't enough
and life feels really rough.
Sometimes the truth isn't told
and people aren't very bold.

Sometimes trying isn't worth it
and you just want to quit.
Sometimes your friends aren't nice
and words feel like ice.

Sometimes you don't want to be living
and  angry people aren't always forgiving.
Sometimes  everything good you thought you had
changes and turns to bad.

Sometimes smiles hide the fears
and scars make up for the tears.
Sometimes you wear black
so nobody can tell you are about to crack.

Sometimes yelling doesnt work
and your boyfriend acts like a jerk.
Sometimes you can see the end
and you start to wish it was all pretend.

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  • Sometimes your friends aren't nice
    and words feel like ice.

    so powerful excelent write dont change a thing!