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Choosing Guidance Affirmation

The Holy Spirit directs my script
I enjoy peace and joy and happiness
He picks me up whenever I slip
as I wake from my crazy ego trip

I thank Him for his gentle reaching hand
to lead me in this fearsome, deceptive land
as I participate in the good and evil play
upon this temporal, enthralling stage

The Holy Spirit directs my script
as my character moves naturally around
by ignoring ego’s insane raucous rants
peace and joy and happiness is found

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  • Humm..and when happiness is found..then you are at the destination my friend..well described poetry once again..very well said indeed...


  • poetryality silver member
    November 2

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    It is good to have God at the helm. As in Theatre, sometimes we loose our lines and have to adlib but as long as the added words are contextual and delivered with the strength set forth in the "script", we can manage to get back on track. God forgives our "ego-tripping'" and our shortcomings because He knows that we are mere mortals. He embraces even those who have walked away and wish to return. There are wonderful layers of truth written here poet. The best to you in the contest.

    Excellent!


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee