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A Simple Wish

What I want is simple
I don't think it's too much to ask for.
I want space. A place were I can go and stay safe.
Some where that nobody judges me and I am what I want.
Some place were nobody will compare me to people I hate.
A place were you know who's real or who's fake.

But if I reach such a place, what will people think of me?
When they see who I am will they leave alone
a place that I've learned is so cold.

I guess what I want isn't so simple. It's pretty complex. I want others to be exposed, but if  I can't betray myself that way how do I want to expose others?

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