you're lookin' just a little too hard at me
everybody knows
I've grown sick
remember those walls I built
doodily ding-dong, tick-tock
outside my home, I'm lookin' hard
guess who's back, back again?
I'm a killer, cold and wrathful
one shot, two shots, three shots, four shots
turn away
I watch how the moon sits in the sky
I live a life filled with chicken and malt-liquor
forgotten faces,
waking in a sweat again
I'm comin' down from the mountain
sticks and stones might break my bones
I know what you're thinking
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the phoenix he helped create
it's time to lay claim to the evidence
sweat, sweat, 'cause I'm a poisonous pill
and the little boy stared
dead man lying on the bottom of the grave
a note by the door
read the warning signs
come lay it down
[this has been said so many times that
I'm not sure if it matters]
a lonely road
arms are raised above the sky
as I fall deeper into a manic state
yo, same song and dance
darkness coats us
Author notes
line one - Get Right by Jennifer Lopez
line two - Sky is Over by Serj Tankian
line three - Ballad for the Last Romantics by New Found Glory
line four - Halo by Beyonce
line five - Deththeme by Dethklok
line six - So Now You Know by Neurosonic
line seven - Just Lose it by Eminem
line eight - The Horror of Our Love by Ludo
line nine - One Shot, Two shot by Eminem/D12
line ten - Cancer by My Chemical Romance
line eleven - A Place for My Head by Linkin Park
line twelve- Word of Mouf Freestyle by Ludacris
line thirteen- Forgotten Faces by Avenged Sevenfold
line fourteen - Given Up by Linkin Park
line fifteen - Man Behind the Curtain by Valient Thorr
line sixteen - Sticks and Stones by Valient Thorr
line seventeen - This is Not a Song, It's a Sandwich! by Psychostick
line eighteen - Toxicity by System of a Down
line nineteen - Soil by System of a Down
line twenty - Six Feet Under the Stars - All Time Low
line twenty-one - Electroshock by 3OH!3
line twenty-two - Nuguns by System of a Down
line twenty-three - Soldier Side by System of a Down
line twenty-four - By the Way by Theory of a Deadman
line twenty-five - Caution! Girls by Stereo Skyline
line twenty-six - Praise the Lord and Pass the Ammunition by Serj Tankian
line twenty-seven/twenty-eight - Get Busy Living or Get Busy Dying by Fall Out Boy
line twenty-nine - Elect the Dead by Serj Tankian
line thirty- Deja Vu by Eminem
line thirty-one - Same Song and Dance by Eminem
line thirty-two - Darkness Surrounding by Avenged Sevenfold.
this in itself should give you an idea of how eclectic my music taste is.
lines twenty-seven and twenty-eight are from the same song, but I put them into two separate lines to make it look better aesthetically. but that's why they're in brackets.
my username is A u g u s t S t a r l i g h t .
A contest entry
- another ipod shuffle contest... by just weak hands.
650 points, ended November 17, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
delete me from your memory
Comments
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SYSTEM OF A DOWN! =D
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I really loved this. So cool to add lines from all the songs you like. Nice taste in music as well.
I hope you win something because you deserve it. Keep it up. 
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I'd love to win something . xD
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ahaha you certainly seem to have a good variety of music. I like it
and I'm really liking this poem ! I honestly don't know what to say, and believe me, that's a good thing. All in all, this is brilliant.
thanks for entering !
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thank you =]
that is a good thing for the comment judge to tell me.
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Get Right by Jennifer Lopez
-i haven't heard that song in SO long.
xD
it's got a weird intro
this is a really cool write.
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haha at least you know it.
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Sticks and stones may break your bones, but words will bring you to your knees and disintegrate your heart. Impressive, as usual. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie. 
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This was crazy-mazing.
I saw SoaD, Linkin Park, and Dethklok lol. I skimmed the author's notes.
This is like. Awesome. Damn. I LOVE it.
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This is a very intense and interesting write..i enjoyed it, great imagery and writing. =}
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wow,
this was AMAZING.
I watch how the moon sits in the sky
I live a life filled with chicken and malt-liquor
forgotten faces,
waking in a sweat again
I'm comin' down from the mountain
sticks and stones might break my bones
I know what you're thinking
conversion, software version 7.0
the phoenix he helped create
it's time to lay claim to the evidence
my favorite part.
this is absolutely fantastic, i am going to favorite this and read it again.
you're so talented.
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haha,
my iTunes did that, not me. -
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you're still talented,
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thanks.
it's really eclectic.
it will go from Metallica to Eminem to All Time Low. and that's normal.
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Omg wow, this is really cool!!! I love the title!
Great work! Good luck!!
x
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