Im goin to mars,on a spaceship WooHoo!
Uh oh a meteor hit us.
We are going down,downto the way everyone goes\
This is the last of me
My life was well while it lasted,
untill now
A contest entry
- Metaphysical Poems #3 by drifting cloud.
1000 points, ended November 3, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What was your first impression?
Comments
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Wow! Life is just a big trip, anyway. That's all it is.
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This one has feelings in it
