This a fresh start?
Forgive me I doubt.
As the autumn kills the last warm rays
I am still stuck to my old ways.
The chains of memory still hold me back,
something new is what I truly lack.
Every day is just the same routine,
everything was already seen.
And I’m afraid it’s far too late
for a new dawn and a clean slate.
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This is how I've been feeling about my life lately.
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So Saturnian. We often experience obstacles, failure, depression as Saturn works to give us what we truly want, the way we program our universe at its deepest level. And the gifts do come with time. Saturn works slowly, methodically making a strong foundation for your life. Thank you for writing. There is comfort in realizing others have/ do feel the way you do. You are not alone. This too shall pass. Change your thoughts and the world around you changes.Try fantasizing about how you would like your life to be. Wouldn't it be nice if.......?
Find something, however small, that gives you a better feeling to concentrate on, and, gradually, your thoughts will turn in a more pleasant direction. As you feel better, know that your dreams are coming closer to you every day. You call your life to you by your thoughts about how it is going to be. You are actually doing quite well with it. This IS a friendly universe. Just keep writing and give it time. Blessings on your heart.
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Aww it's never to late to start a new slate .
Keep your hopes high , and things will
change for the best for you - by and by ...
Take care ,
Thank you for sharing this poem !
Best always & hugs , Friend Easy
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The unbearable and unavoidable point that comes up in everyone's life... But it can slowly mend... just give it some time and a dose of optimism...
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This is truly unbearable when nothing seems to change in my world.
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Have thoroughly enjoyed this poem... Well done!
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are ya.......so much................groove is dep and so is the poem.....visit me for my latest ones -
good job
good poetry and emotion, I thought the metere was off, but I enjoyed the poem anyway,good job -
aww..love its never too late trust me.. i dont open up to people easily and trust is hard for me after a life of learning barely anything other than learning no tto trust. but in the end its never too late for a clean slate. anytime you are ready not just when you think you are but when you truly are you can start over.. great write though
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i definately know how you feel. someone tells you they want to stop fighting and have their "clean slate" but it still doesn't change them, they just continue to act like their old selves. but sometimes people can amaze you and do better and be better people because they truely care about their relationship with you. you never know when you can really count on someone. i hope that you'll find more people you can count on that deserve their clean slates and second chances. I hope you get unstuck.
nicely written with great rhyme and rhythm. keep on writing!
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Thank you so much for your lovely words, they're much appreciated.
Nela
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Dubious thoughts on hope for the future....Your thoughts will change, but you have brought the thoughts of what it is like to be discouraged...We all have our ups and downs....Well written...
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Thank you for stopping by!
Nela
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Great title and words expressed. Glad you're getting them down on paper. Respectfully must strongly disagree---fake it till you make it. Keep trying. It's never too late!
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Thank you Marlene for your encouraging words. I won't stop trying, no way! Just needed to get rid of that feeling.
Nela
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woww, very powerful and i love the emotion you bring.
i feel like this alot too, great write & thanks for the comment.
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Thank you so much for taking your time to read it.
Nela
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