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writing with a fragrance
of rose petals
a dancing blend
of aromas
floating in a room
heady and subtle
each word makes
imprints that will
last longer than
any flower
yet the memory
will smell so sweet
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Author notes
mushy crap???
What did you think
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Mushy works if you mean it & your poetry carries that intensity, it always comes across with urgency, so this is doubly interesting. The softness is nice. It's good for the heart to just take it all in sometimes.
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Thanks V hope life is treating you well.
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very mushy, but I like it! which is surprising because I tend to cook/eat 'mushy' over an open fire.
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Yes like mushy peas.
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