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Marc Creamore’s Visions

The dreaded Winter Solstice has begun
and breezes echo through the Sacred Tree.
Marc Creamore writes to tell us what we’ve done
as calendars all stop in harmony.
Marc tries to see this change objectively,
he knows this is the coming of an age;
his warnings come in verses on a page.

The people gather in their sacred shrines,
Marc tells of monks that shed unwanted tears.
The wars have stopped, there are no borderlines
and news casts are obsessed with human fears.
The wheel of modern science now appears
to lose momentum slowing to a halt
and all the blame has shifted to a fault.

The bones of all the bridges are at rest
and transportation simply fades away.
The animals now seem to be possessed
and mock us as they pass the time of day.
The towers of the mighty show decay
as lovely flowers blanket them unfurled.
It's who Marc warned us of this brand new world.

 

 

Author notes

 I apologize to those who have read this poem before. I was asked to re-post it. 

Quote from: Rob Ganson :

"Marc Creamore sees the city/planet/universe through the wise eyes of an innocent child.  He shifts the vagaries of modern existence through a mind that is open to unfortunate reality, yet able to enliven the seemingly barren future with shades of hope. Eastern philosophy seems to enwrap his visage, his voice, with the calm of an elder and the wonder of a child."
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  • Purrsanthema
    November 17
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    This is so wonderful! Although I'm unfamiliar, completely with his work I cannot but say he'd be honored by this entirely. Your second line is so beautiful it gives me chills!

    I myself am thankful for much of science and therefore technology: without it I wouldn't be alive nor would I have the freedom to read your beautiful words now.

    The poem only grows through age and I love it even more than when I read it the first time!


  • PerVirtuous
    November 11
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    Hmmmm.... Don't know if I agree with the philosophical conclusions of this piece, but the poetry is very interesting and well crafted. I am not a reader of Marc Creamore, so I cannot comment on its accuracy. All I can say is flippin' good poem.


  • poetryality silver member
    November 6

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    The words, the flow, the content, and tribute...PERFECTION! These words attribute themselves to a Master. From one to the other, such a wonderful tribute. I am more than sure Marc will love to see this re-post. You are such a brilliant writer of forms. The best to you in this tribute/contest. Lovely sentiments and such passion...SIGH~

    Much Love ♥

    renee


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    November 6

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    Exquisitely accomplished CONTEST's task...



    Twenty one flawless alexandrites to pay homage to a visionary and Poet of our time... A poetic jewel to show appreciation to a deserved son of Mother Poet.

    Much gratitude to the author of "Marc Creamore’s Visions" for allowing us the opportunity to read this Tribute, and to be introduced to the Tributee.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

  • Eusebius
    November 3

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    This is excellent, again you prove why you are the Master of the Many Forms! Perfect meter! A stupendously great poem and I absolutely loved it!


  • Desire gold member
    November 2

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    Wow~

    I imagine he will Adore this piece and what a Beauty it is for I do not know this Poet but can summize he has much to share~ and speaks for the Wise to listen
    Gorgeous Dedication~ Woot!!!
    Adore the Form also the Message You have woven in the seams
    Excellent! Bravo!
    Keep that quill dancing Beautiful
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice & Talent
    Best wishes in the contest~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • penman gold member
    November 2

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    Beautiful

    You always flow such magic with every poem. True brilliance shines in every line. What a fantastic write. Best of luck in the contest

  • i can't think of what to say here but i do know that this was a great read, an amazing tribute, keep it flowing, looking forward to more


  • Pure Thought silver member
    November 1

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    I cannot comment deeply enough on this. Perfection!


  • just mercedes gold member
    October 31

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    I'm so glad you re-posted this! Everything I said last time, and hugs for standing up for your form!


  • Cannonsfire
    October 31

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    Beautifully rhymed A, he will love this from you C


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    October 31

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    My sister wrote this!


    • Amera gold member
      November 1

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      This is the nicest comment you have ever left for me


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 31

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    Well, I for one do not require an apology, Amera - I was quite pleased to see this back in the contest, where it belonged. As you know, I didn't want you to delete it in the first place. Marc was duly impressed and quite pleased by your offering. So, once more, good luck in Rob's contest, Sweetie.




  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 31

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    i'm confused..

    I could swear i read and commented on this piece before?? oh well!..it's still an amazing piece of work, and a nice dedication my friend..


    • Amera gold member
      October 31
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      LOL, you did silly ... read the notes!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 31

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    It was superb on the first reading, still is

    I love to read your rime royale

    Great stuff

    Jeff


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 31

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    Still a pleasure reading this brilliant piece again..I love the entire piece, yet I find the final stanza to be simply stunning and thought provolking
    Thanks for sharing..love David

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