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The Swamps of Louisanna

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 The swamp was the only way to get home that Halloween night.

There is a tale about the Lady dress in black

On the street of New Orleans

Everywhere you look there were so many

All in black 

 Men didn’t know who was which

One by one the men disappeared

Then there was only one left

He was frighten by all mean

For he knew he was the one who will be the lady in black’s lover for the night

The ladies were  huddle together

as they walk in the street

 It been over twenty years since she was last seen

This year the Halloween was held at the swamps café in

New Orleans

So they all sat in a corner waiting and hoping the guys would come back

They didn’t like it when they play games

The bartender came over

This person just left  

She brought all of you a drink

He said it is good for you

 Got all kinds of fruits 

 We call it the Hurricane

But most of them call it bloody Mary

When they look down into the glass

There was a finger off someones hand

They drop the glasses onto the floor

They scream so loud it woke up the dead

The skeleton came in one by one asking the bartender for a beer

They look over and saw the girls with big eyes like they seen ghosts all around

They said

This one for you ladies for sure

If you like we will walk you home

But the swamps will be the only way to go

The ladies didn’t know what to do

They just sat there shaking and rattling so hard

their bones broke

They all rise to get out of there

 It was clear the guys were not here

So they all walk home by the way of the swamp

Then they approach a tree with branches falling to the ground

All in the trees were the guys feets, hands and, tongues. 

But the most that caught theirs eyes

Was the manhood of their men

They screamed again

  out of the corner

They heard the lady in black

It may have been a story of long ago

But now ladies, you know

I may pop up any time

So I can have a tasty meal of a man

Take down the manhood of your man

Put it by your bed

It will surely keep the men away

 You never come home with a man to stay

If you move I go with you

If you look at a man

You will be like me

 

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Every one like when i write about the swamps and the lady in black. So i decided to spices it up

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  • Montey silver member
    November 1
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    Very Scarey.Glad I'm not walking through that swamp!Montey


  • poisonivystar4
    November 1
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    That was cool! Good luck in the contest!