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"I Wish I Could"

If I could I would take you home...
Not as in a home that either of us knew, but a home for us
If I could I'd walk with you daily in the cold, rain, heat and snow
And when you couldn't walk I'd carry you home in my arms

If I could I'd make you burst with joy...
Not simple joy you feel with someone you like, but overflowing
If I could I'd hold your hand everyday even when you don't want too
Even when your grumpy, mad, sad, angry, depressed, I'd grip tight

If I could your beautiful smile would never leave your gorgeous face...
I'd make you smile, not just your little tough girl, but your beautiful one
If I could I'd place a kiss on your lips everyday to make you blush
Even in the rain when your grumpy or in the sun and happy, I'd kiss

But the most important thing I'd do if I could everyday rain or shine...
To make you feel loved, to bring out the goodness in you because of the love
If I could I'd make you the happiest woman in the world everyday
Even when you felt unloved, wanting to be alone...I'd be there to carry, grip and kiss
In the darkest of times I'd grip your hand to guide, in the hardest of times carry you

And everytime, all the time to kiss you to remind you how loved you are by me
If I could I would, I'd give up forever to hold you just to know what it feels like
When everything's made to be perfect I just want you know who I am
I'm someone whose trying to be the one that can make you truely happy...

There is no If..I do and know I love you...

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  • This is a pure and heartfelt expression of love. A love that seems concrete and impossible to doubt. A truly beautiful work, I love the structure, language used, and how you worded each line. Bravo!

  • AAwwww J this is soo... well... touching really. You had a sentamental moment! CALL THE PRESS!! lol jk... it's wonderful hun good job... now go back and get to work on my book MR!

  • crosscountry07
    October 31

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    This is so sweet, Jordan. If this is directed at someone, you should totally send this to her. Well done, keep up the great work. God Bless! -Lissa