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Imagination

The world is dark but my eye is clear
More sharp
Focused like an eagle
I am the prey
Bite me and I shall poison
With words, landscapes
Gravity is on the outside
When you close your eyes
A lack of imagination
Is the only ceiling

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  • Aribeth
    November 20

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    Nice Work Hun

    I like how you've dated your poem at the end. Is that a trademark? I guess the only way to find out is to read another poem, but I go through poems by clicking random. 2 claps hun xx