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The Worst Poem I Could Come up With at Short Notice

My Mother's Melody

My mother's name was Melanie
She used to sing a song to me
A mournful little melody
While Pa was fishing on the sea.

I don't recall the tune at all
But as she sang, she took a ball
And bounced it gaily off the wall
And off my head, and off her shawl.

And now, whenever music plays
I still recall those far off days
Although my brain's a sort of haze
Because of mother's cruel ways.

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  • chills gold member
    November 4
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    I can relate to reveller's comment!!! Reminds me of my mother.....!!
    XD

  • reveller silver member
    October 31
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    Oh dear..

    If this is your worst...you see, if I wrote this, I would be moderately pleased with myself. ouch!!


    • Keith
      October 31
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      That is very nice of you to say so. I'm sure I can do worse if pushed.