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~An Angel's Sorrow...

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My wings cannot carry me,
weighted by sin -
turned to stone.

Mournful are my days,
all for the love of  a man.

I cry my tears at night,
no one can hear me.
Heart heavy with pain,
that he does not know.

Sent from Heaven to be,
his guardian angel.

Fate is sealed now,
my punishment set.
Willful is my heart,
burdened forever.

Oh Lord! Hear my plea,
for all I did was to love.


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  • poetryality silver member
    November 2

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    It always seem that angels come and have their wings plucked of feathers by those who claim to love them so. I hear your pleas and know that God hears them as well. There is sadness here but also relief in simply knowing that love is the ultimate good for all. A very heartfelt work dear Sie! I hope that the receiver of your goodwill someday knows what he has been blessed with.


    Always &hearts';

    Renee


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 2

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    Oh, the plaintive tears
    well from the words,
    visibly showing
    your emotion.
    A sad lovely, sie.

    M-C


  • Pure Thought silver member
    November 1
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    NIcely painted images depicting such sorrowfu lfeelings. Being an angel must be hell at times.


  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 31

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    i can so relate to this love can sometimes leave one scared and condemed yet it is the will of the Lord a shame but often true bless you the pic and the words walk hand in hand beautifully


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    October 31

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    Aw, the words and picture go well together Sherri, nicely penned hon.

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