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Gone

I look into your eyes
But I can not see you.

I touch your skin
But I do not feel you.

I kiss your lips
But I do not taste you.

I waited for you
But you never showed.

I expected to be encircled by your love
Instead I was engulfed by your black and white rainbow.

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  • karma-n-peace
    November 9

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    Love Love Love the metaphor and the simplistic beauty in this, a colorless rainbow... an excellent way to describe being left by a love.