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Too many times I’ve tried so hard
To be knocked back
Shot down

All confidence is gone
Shattered for the last time.
I cant do this.

Do I need to move anymore?
Need to try and speak
Flimsy promises to the ones
Who expect it of me?

Why move?
Why stir?
I don’t need this.
Its all so simple.

Nothing is easier than something
Spite better than a smile.
I’ll bring the heavens crashing down with me
And stay here just a little while

World-weary, happy to leave…
And I don’t want to come back.
I’m sorry.

But I give up.

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