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He's been my steady Lithium
I craved when I'm in thought
more mystic then the others
allowing things I often fought

I'm dizzy from your Vicodin
that abandons me of sorrow
it makes me love this life again
So I live until tomorrow

My addiction is a fire
That complies within my head
never feeling to conspire
& depart him with such dread

This source of a narcotic
I just can't seem to drop
because he's so quixotic
I'll never ache to stop

And if I'm on conniptions
you'll never be too far
to refill my prescriptions
And shoot me like a star














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  • freddiepoe
    November 8

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    Very poetic. Very beautiful


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    November 7

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    Amazing poem. You have a beautiful talent when it comes to rhyme. I love your word choices, too.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • babygirl2582 silver member
    November 3

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    WELL PENNED

    AMAZINGLY PENNED DEPRESSION SUCKS I HOPE WRITING IS HELPING YOU COPE... BECAUSE READING YOUR WORDS HAS ALREADY HELPED ME... WELCOME TO THE GROUP!


  • spiritual wolf
    November 3

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    wow.. this is one of my greatest fears..i have had depression and for a while feared taking meds, for the fear of addiction alone. you protrayed these feeligns very well. great write


  • Kastor
    November 3

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    Is this the first of your poems I've read? I like it. You did well with all the tools and banged out a decent poem.

  • goosaja
    October 31

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    impacting

    departed souls just go but the debris is hard to digest

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