Feverishly grasping at sheets
Sweat drips, pours, taste my salt
Panting, yelling, screaming your name
You've taken all I have to give
Tied up and pleased
Hair pulled from the scalp
Gently biting me, endless sensations
I have to taste you
Licking, sucking, you explore my mouth
And I...
Will swallow you whole
Taking all you have to give
Completely wrapped around one another
Erotic dreams became reality
Our hearts beat in unison
As forever became a vision in my soul
Author notes
No other lover could compare... he'll always be mine
Please tell me what you think
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PACE
I really enjoy how you make the pace of the poem fast in order for us to feel the intensity and the action happening.
Love it
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*oggle* how did I end up reading an erotica! hahaha, just wanted to read your stuff.... Man, I am blushing from your words. very good. It is romantic and very erotica. It is a passionate love. If this is really personal as it says, you had good sex. congrates! sorry that sounds weird. lol.
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"Erotic dreams became reality" mmmm.... I love the hair pulling bit, just something about being taken!
Love,
Amera♥
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naughty naughty...i think i'm a little wet now
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well ....... I shouldnt have clicked the link.... i will never be able to see my bluey the same way again "shakes head" well it was a good poem
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wow
this was a dream..so well wrought.Check mine if you do wish. -
I'm flattered.
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Been there. Done that. Dreamed that dream and occasionally still do. However, the dream stays a dream and the past remains behind me like my buttocks and the bean burrito that passed through an hour earlier. LOL
Hope all is well, my dear.
Dez -
i need to change pants....and my shirt....and my thoughts
amazing, sensual. bravo -
Every line of your poem is wonderful, sweet lady!
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