All dressed up and ready for my date
Make up perfect, awaiting my fate
Shoes all polished, my handbag under arm
A quick look to see that my seams were straight
Now I'm ready to spread my charm
Click! Click! Click went the heels of my shoes
As I run to the bus stop, I've got nothing to lose
In town I am meeting the love of my life
Hoping and praying that I will one day be his wife
Step from the bus, my heart skipping a beat
I see him waiting there, Wow! he really looked a treat
The town was quite busy, as I stood on the edge of the pavement
Waiting for the traffic to pass, and then to my amazement
I took a step across the road and heard Ping! and then looked down
Round my ankles lay my panties, those frillies, in the centre of the town
Red with embarrassment, reeling with self pity
I stepped out of my bloomers picked them up with dignity
Crammed them in my handbag, tottering with dismay
Looked up to see my boyfriend walk hurriedly away
Needless to say it was the last I saw of him
The love of my life, it was only just a whim
I still wonder sometimes, if come what may
My knickers held up would I be with him today
Author notes
I did this quickly please be kind to me Jeremy and critique; let me know
Ta!!!
A contest entry
- Get Silly For A Gold! by Jeremy0826.
2000 points, ended November 4, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Things must be different in your part of the world to mine. Believe you me, had I been going to meet a bird and her knickers fell of at the very sight of me, I would have been very bloody interested. Needless to say it was the last you saw of him? He must have been a fairy.
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hee hee what a funny story
best of luck in the contest
Sean
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oh my poor soul but easy way to have won him was say sorry but i dont usaually wear nickers bet he wouldve hung around a lifetime lol cool pen indeed
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LOL! I think that you did very well here. I love the rhyme and the storyline in this. What a terrible thing to have happened to someone. I hope that this wasn't true for you! Thanks a lot for your entry, I appreciate! Good luck to you with this one here!
Jeremy0826
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