although I don't get this either,
i'm lost
and nothing else matters
ergo
we are looking up into air balloons
behind the heat that propells us
i'm so confused
guess I just don't know
see what matters to me
is a knot in my mind
i don't trust myself to untie
are you there and are you serious?
When you sit down looking in and out
Even though we're unaware, we stare
intently we question the moves
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although I don't get this either,
if my balloon were expanding
this gravity wouldn't be happening
ergo
stratospheric sunsets
never really set at all
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all this means is
by the time your air balloon
reaches back to where you started
you challenge faulty obedience
A contest entry
- Nothing Else Matters When.... by AshesFromFire.
1300 points, ended October 31, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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I must say it's gotta take a lot of skill to come up with this eh. well done
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Well, this is he last poem I have to read before judgeing, and I must say Bravo for two seperate things.....
First, I would like to say Bravo on writeing such a wonderful poem.
Second, I'd like to say Bravo for writeing the most unique poem in the bunch. Itip my hat to you.
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