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Enraptured

I am lost without you, for you live inside of me
My tortured soul embraces my being with the thought of ye
Like a volcano erupting with the fire from hell
My passion, exquisite desire, rings like a cathredal bell
A sensation not visible by the human eye,Yet the world can see
The depths of my love, which I give to thee
Like a mighty sword you penetrate deep inside
And the arrows of your quiver, are the rise and fall of the tide
I reach great heights of extreme sheer delight
And I am charged with lightning, an energy, my body alight
Tears of sweat permeate my being,
They are the dewdrops of sheer bliss, only my love is all seeing
I am enraptured, clothed in the heat of your love
Divine unity, melting as one, from the Great God above

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    November 5

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    Divine unity, melting as one

    These words are a perfect summation of the bliss
    described therein. Nice end rhyming and the overall
    feel of this piece brings warm smiles and contentment.
    Blue