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angelic place

the heavens speak your name
your the one who touches my soul
the one who wiped my tears
you lifted me up
i never touched the ground
you were always beneath me

i want to lay down tonight with a smile
the tears will leave
the sadness erased from my mind
drift into a blissful place

follow me there
ill let you in
ill open the gates ive kept closed

the angels will guide you in
let them show you the way
they wont harm you

dont be fooled
take my hand
i wont let go

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  • Eusebius
    November 1

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    a neat and nifty write.. soothing and vey calming, which is too seldom seen on AP, a very good write showing a good deal of talent... Just loved, I did!!!


  • girl shaman
    November 1

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    this was sweet but way over the top on the cliche scale. speak your name, lifted me up, smile with tears, angels angels! love love. hunnie i do believe you have the power to feel anything you want and it's great that you write what you feel so i don't feel that's something 'bad' but in my opinion it could be better. but we all are intitled to our opinions, so whatever makes you happy, thank you for giving me the privilage to read your poem :


  • Fallen-Thumper
    October 31

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    I really like this piece =]
    It says a lot and i love the emotion and feel to it
    Amazing as always and a really great write


  • tinygirl8
    October 31

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    hey

    hey enjoyed this one alot you need to keep writing on love and just write from your heart dont worrry if someone may or maynot like it... just make sure if you liike it somone else will thanks forappaluse peace

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