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Average in a Black Hole While Holding Brief Ligaments of Hell


How ancient was your touch,
forgotten pieces of love.

Arrogant I became too soon.

Broken images surround dreams.
So beautiful you stood still
bright with bitter lies dangling.

Anxious and afraid I screamed
to have it all back again.
Boiling over with fear, I lost you.


Amused with past regrets you were
so brave to speak the awful truth,

better we have become in the silence.


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word bank: afraid, amused, ancient, anxious, arrogant, average, awful, beautiful, better bitter, black, boiling, brave, brief, bright, broken,

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  • GotLilt
    November 3
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    A lovely use of the word bank. Thanks for entering this.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 31

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    creativity with truth that is what makes a great poem in my eyes and that is what you have given mixed with a word bank, keep it flowing