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Well that was interesting

I know that sometimes things might not make sense to you right now
It was two weeks after the day she turned eighteen
I can't stand to fly, I'm not that nieve
If I'd have known the way that this would end, if I'd have read the last page first

I think about life, and oh how it changes so fast
I hope the day's come easy and the moments pass slow and each road leads you where you want to go
Your the direction I follow to get home
Maybe I'm the one, maybe I'm the one who is the schizaphrenic pyscho

You want to throw down go on put your hands up
When it rains, on this side of town it touches everything
I heard your doing ok but I want you to know, I'm a dick I'm addicted to you
Black dress with the tights underneath, I got the breath of the last cigarette on my teeth

You don't know how long I've wanted to touch your lips again and hold you tight
Homecoming, I'm coming my sweet mistake
I wait for the postman, to bring me a letter
I couldn't tell you, why she felt that way, she felt it everyday

Author notes

1. Mocking bird-eminem
2.Just a dream-carrie underwood
3. It's not easy to be me-five for fighting
4. I would of loved you anyway-trisha yearwood
5. Gone away-safteysuit
6. my wish-rascal flatts
7. six months-hey monday
8. pyscho- puddle of mudd
9. put your hands up-family force five
10.when it rains-paramore
11.Addicted-simple plan
12. Don't trust me-3!03
13Alone-carrie underwood
14. Homecoming-Hey monday
15.Confessions of a broken heart-Linsey lohan
16. Nobody's home-Avril lavigne

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  • just weak hands
    November 1

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    ahaha interesting, indeed ! There are some great lines in here, but unfortunately I don't think many of them connect very well. I think if you put it into a different format and spaced out the lines or something, it would seem more poetic. I dunno. This is all by chance anyhow :]

    thanks for entering !