Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

My Flower

An Iris
Indigo Blue
Wild in nature
Just like you

Never to be fully understood
But just admired
From afar
As you like it so transpired

I'll keep you in my soul
My eyes forever will keep that vision
For the season has come and gone
But my memories of you will defy all definition









    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5
  • Bruce silver member
    November 18

    Edit | Reply
    I like all wild flowers but I agree, Blue Flags are perhaps the most beautiful, and their delicate shapes, so intricate and complex, seem un-understandable (is that a word? lol). What an evocative write!

  • Brook-1 gold member
    November 7

    Edit | Reply
    Wild flowers are so beautiful. I love fields that are colored with them. You caught this creatively and with good imagery. Nice write. Thanks for the chance to get to read you.
    Brook


  • Swan song gold member
    October 31
    Edit | Reply
    I love irises and tiger lilies to

    ilike your poem lol nicely done!


  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 30
    Edit | Reply
    how sttunningly beautiful this is my oh my touched deep with this its just awesomely lovely glenn x

1 - 5 of 5