I look up,and think of you.
Are you somewhere, thinking of me too?
The longer I look, the more i see.
Stars are more than just astronomy.
They are balls of fire, like the love in our hearts,
Like the hope that someday we won't be apart.
Sometimes I think that stars are made
by lovers like us whose love didn't fade.
And they leave behind their message, for all to see.
That true love never dies, like between you and me.
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The ending is very romantic and inspiration, and your images of the stars as made by lovers is stunning. This piece is beautiful. Good luck.
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cassie
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