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which memory makes a richer color

forever a field will hold it

white whipped, tossed about

a sail, billowed with words

a language softly drawn

 

veils of blown out phrases

where i kept them

 

the small corner 

near the feather weeds

catstails and dandelions

 

overhead clouds scurry

it isn't as important now,

why we need grey

or why blue is harder 

 

that's imagination,

why we should never let go

 

a bow on your kite

whenever needed

 

 

 

 

 

 

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dandelions

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  • Randomly Beautiful
    November 17
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    Blue is harder.


  • just mercedes gold member
    October 31

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    a snapshot of place and time, of emotional content. words sail, carry their seeds with them, sprout in the most unexpected places, colonize.

    enjoyed this - best of luck in the contest.


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    October 31
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    Ah!