Cool wind blows steam
from my deep grays,
clothes, a mere mystery
for impatient unraveling.
An inch away beneath
the silver maple,
we etch eternal
in hearted syllables.
Breath quickens like
the chuggin' choo-choo
in fawning distance.
Brilliant pinkish purple
hovers above heated red,
aurae adjoin, energy slips as
we burst in accommodation-
the perfect match
inside-out.
Author notes
Intensity filters sunlight,
insistent of publicly,
private rumblings.
A horse carriage of
rock-a-bys and boughs
touch as a fallen leaf,
still moist from the dew.
Lain tracks bear wood
engaging comfortable steel,
a swig from the potion of creation,
His breath freshly squeezed.
As the forest stole for warmth
I only needed one ignition ...
You.
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Inspiration: take me now
I'm over on the word count if both the AN and the poem need to be under 100 words. Separately both are under 100 words though, like in the 50's. I'm unable at this point to pare it down without losing its effect.
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Prompt is title or picture, but with a twist.
I want you to write it like you normally would, then in the author's note, I want you to flip it over, literally.
I want the same emotion invoked in the second as in the first.
If this step seems too much just stick to writing for the original prompt.
I realize word restrictions confine-so if you cant stick with it, that's okay too. The trick is to turn in something truly unique, truly inspiring, and as Buddy says, I need to melt.
Sexual orientation is not important, body parts aren't either (well...they are, but not as much). Go deeper into the picture than that, there's a reason I've changed it five times to bring you something unique.
50 to 100 words, no more.
I want to feel you.
Im not talking about real life, but in your write, you knew that, huh? lol.
Have fun and you have one week to reserve,
three weeks to complete.
A contest entry
- the embodiment of erotica -->take me now (final round) by JinSays.
4506 points, ended November 16, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Comments
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Holy Mother of Pearl Jam!
Wow~ Now You sure took the challenge head on
What a weaving of words my Friend and I had to
pick my jaw up from the floor for You sure put things
into perspective~ while the monitor fogs up
I was reading the requirements and was like
so I have to get a brain transplant to be with the
program
And You painted some serious images that twisted
my tongue~~
Keep that quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Voice & Talent
Best wishes in the contest~
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Would it be appropriate to take my clothes off yet?
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What?! You have clothes on?
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Well, not anymore, derr
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Not bad. I like it. A western with a sensual flair to it. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
~Donna~
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mesmerizing. I like the western references lol. It gives a nice mood to it.
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you cant be insane that's Jin and my job lol you have to just be plain nuts!
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nuts. check!
... so who is to say that insanity is an adjective and that it is me?
I'm flapdoodle ... hear me RoAr! ...
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hey flapdoodle sounds like fun I wanna be one too RAWR!!!
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You can't make sense then .. yep. That's the only stip.
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sounds abso&*)JEUW$&(%&)*^_$W*^&WWWWWW*$b up my alley
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Is your modem acting up?
Looks like something I had to correct at work the other day. 
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it reads legibly to me???
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