I've stopped trying to sprinkle
flower seeds among the clouds
and pirouette on the sails of pirate ships;
for the first time, a boy's
words exhaled goosebumps across my arms
and shaded sanguine outside
the lines of my face
and his name wasn't yours
Author notes
Hell. Yeah.
A contest entry
- Just make it amazing! by X.brokenlover.X.
977 points, ended November 18, 299 entries
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Hell Yeah is right! I loved this poem, It's short but really who ever said the best poems are the long ones, I think the pain and joy of this goes great together making it an amazing write!, Some might tell you to expand on the thought or rethink the idea but I won't I think it's awesome just how it is, again great job on this, I encourage you to keep the pen moving and the voice flowing.
-Kevin
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Aww thank you so much for the lovely comment!!!! I really appreciate it!!! =)
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